While a computer and a cell phone are completely different as a cell phone is used for calling and a computer is use to assess assignments, search for subjects of interest, and to mail people all around the world in seconds, both possess the ability to entertain and inform the user.
Pretty limited comparison - too obvious. How could you have taken this to a new level and make the reader see both objects in a different way? Try to shoot for 150 words :)
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