1. I have answered the prompt, the promt wanted me to find how she was addressing American culture. Which was answered in my thesis.
2.Yes, the thesis clearly states what the prompt asks.
3. Yes the idea of how america is manipulative and centers their popularity on a specific object.
4. I have focused on how she explains how american culture manipulates, and how it is all about trends.
5.Yes, I referred to the prompt every single time I presented a point.
1. Thesis and conclusion went well.
2. The sentence structure did not go well.
3. I would change the length of the essay, and the grammatical mistakes.
4. Yes, timed writes always end up how I organize it, my organization is always perfect.
5. Referring her point to many things today, such as Jordan sneakers, basketball, and every item that is popluar in America such as I pod.
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